Saturday, September 18, 2004
poem

i'm sorry i couldn't help it. i had to change the layout. i had to. because i made it =) yes i did. if you go to blogskins and look under the username 'eaglefeather' there i'll be. and it rocks. =) i've had great comments so far. yay.

and also this was based on a poem i wrote.. enjoy.

i don't wanna see you gone by me

take my hand and look at me
tell me, honestly, what you see
do you see the pain i hide
do you see how hard i tried

if it's hurting us, baby
then there's no point
holding on
but i don't want you gone

i wish you'd hold me tight
as i lie awake at night
thinking of could and would haves
things i wanted to do with you

i heard you weep when you
walked out and said
"no more"

i'm sorry that i ever hurt you
i'm sorry that i ever made you cry

if only your touch could
soothe the pain
i'd give everything
just to see you again

baby please don't leave me, i need you
baby please don't leave me, i want you
when the sky comes tumbling down
it's you i turn to
i don't wanna see you gone

if it's hurting us, baby
then there's no point
holding on
but i don't wanna see you gone

vera and wen-yi say it's a song. grace says it's a poem and i say it's crap. i wonder what xewwy'll say. =)

gotta run.


* s w e e t heart`x @ [[9:48 PM]]